Thursday, May 17, 2012

Recommended, No Star


Silent aroma reminiscent of Brahms
A bicycle taste, greener than red

Off key in nutmeg, deaf to the touch
Don't fascinate it. Smoke will fix

your eyes bluer on its dog-fur sound
Best before after. Try mixed with Tuesday.

Sorella

6 comments:

  1. Pleasantly synesthetic. Sounds a bit like a review of something you'd drink out of a box. I will make sure not to fascinate it.

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  2. Rachael,
    Thank you for the fluff, and I think you are right :-) It certainly won't fascinate you back!

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  3. There's something very fresh about this one, Sorella. And, well, now I feel like deliberately fascinating it, just to see what happens.

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  4. Report to me on your findings :-) Thank you so much for commenting, Nitika! I wanted to try something that didn't make sense. Next time I should try writing with no syntax -- hard too.

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  5. That was fun. Trippy. 'Best before after.'

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  6. Karin, this one was so fresh and fun, thanks for sharing it!

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